Sunday, November 12, 2006
Labels: kobita, poem
posted by Gagan at 11/12/2006 08:45:00 PM
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gagan bhaiya
tomer kobitata sotti khuuuub shundor
the main thing is u can make others feel what u are feeling inside with this poem
its really nice
but ekta chotto negative comment kori
rag koro na
tomer kobitata khub shundor banglae likha kintu ek jaegae tumi "plz" word ta use korecho
thats kind of break s the rythm of the poem
rag kor na, ami jani kobi ja likhe tai kobita. even meanigless word o oneke use kore, but that was my honest opinion.
ami nadia
shanil;a apur kache amer naam shune thakte paro ami or sathe office kori
na shune thakle u can ask her abt me
plz reply me if u can and tell me what u felt abt my negative comment honestly.
my mail address zahangir.nadia@gmail.com
gagan bhaiya
tomer kobitata sotti khuuuub shundor
the main thing is u can make others feel what u are feeling inside with this poem
its really nice
but ekta chotto negative comment kori
rag koro na
tomer kobitata khub shundor banglae likha kintu ek jaegae tumi "plz" word ta use korecho
thats kind of break s the rythm of the poem
rag kor na, ami jani kobi ja likhe tai kobita. even meanigless word o oneke use kore, but that was my honest opinion.
ami nadia
shanil;a apur kache amer naam shune thakte paro ami or sathe office kori
na shune thakle u can ask her abt me
plz reply me if u can and tell me what u felt abt my negative comment honestly.
my mail address zahangir.nadia@gmail.com